Sapphire | Sonic Channel

Neat? I guess...? Alright the purportions are correct and this matches the sonic style so Im not going to go on about it.
Now, the style. I don't think this style has really had thought put into it.
I honestly do like the crosshatching however the shading could use some work to match the style of the lines more (in my opinion)
also, the crosshatching border lines look like part of the lineart itself so I think you should make them softer.
I will also add that I do like the highlights.
Also the fact that you kept some of the guidelines on the head makes me want to add that you should probably keep some of them elsewhere in your drawing so that people do not mistake the lineart as "sloppily and badly drawn"
sorry if this was hard to read I'm not good at organising